If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
i do not agree entirely with the speaker that goal although is worthy considering all means
which even if it affect others is not acceptable.I would cite few examples and reasons to
substantiate my position.
Firstly,one need to set goals in life which could help them live a better life.But not
everyone who set it might be some obstacles which could affect others force them
to leave it as a dream.Like such as,a student wish to pursue graduation abroad by
leaving his job would stay left out as his family purely runs on his income and he can't
afford the study cost and leaving the family on hardships.Although he could have taken a
bold step by saving money where he can manage both.Short-term goals and long-term goals can
be obtained by any terms if it is a worthy in life.
Secondly,The example of a student who wishes to get first rank is his goal in life but if he
cheats in the exam then it is not worthy winning it.One must make sure that to meet
something hard work and sincerity would lead substantially to success.For example,There was
an entrepreneur in india who was thrown out of his house in his teenage slept on roads,faced
money issues and yet his ideas and intelligence to achieve what he set in life made him
achieve his goal by becoming the most successful business person in becoming one among the
forbes under 30.
Thirdly,There is a parochial outlook even to reach for example,a politician to become a leader is his goal but he fools people bribes them and many means of fraud things is done by him just to achieve what he wants but the people would be suffering just because of his mistakes and it is not worth attaining it just by fooling people and risking their lives.
In the conclusion,Would say that no matter what the goal is unless it benefits people and proper ways of reaching it would always be successful and not trying to reach just to help oneself and affecting people is not worth winning it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8591954023 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7017286613 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543103448276 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 23.0359550562 300% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.372206733 60.3974514979 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 338.2 118.986275619 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.6 23.4991977007 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.21951772744 364% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.97078651685 362% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 43.0 7.80617977528 551% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125367041365 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656567983444 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196710495755 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364358642946 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370347322448 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 14.1392134831 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.8 12.1743820225 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 11.2143820225 264% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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