A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few individuals are of the opinion that humans should not exploit animals and instead, provide them equal rights, as people. However, others opine that animals must be used for various purposes such as scientific experimentation and food. I will elaborate both these views, along with my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with the first school of thought, that is, to not to use animals for human benefits. Firstly, people think that animals are also living creatures. they also feel pain and undergo stress when they are kept in cages and ill-treated. Secondly, vegans and vegetarians are strictly against the killing and consumption of animal products. they support the fact that nowadays, there are a plethora of healthier substitutes, which have various more nutrients than meat products.
Turning to the second view, which is also my opinion; animals should be used for the benefit of the humankind. first of all, human beings are the finest creation of the Almighty. Henceforth, our sole purpose is to safeguard the survival of humans on the planet. And for this, animals are required to make and test the drugs to cure deadliest diseases because if the drugs are tested directly on people, it can cause severe illnesses in case the medication needs amendment. Next, if the animals are not slaughtered and consumed, their number will skyrocket, and soon there will be more wild animals than people.
To conclude, undoubtedly animal feel pain yet, they have been made for the welfare of the human beings. Hence, people should avoid rigidity and use the animals for every purpose imaginable, to make their survival possible in this world.
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Suggestion: cure the deadliest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56977667563 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4935987969 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377407057308 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118574038296 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07188269387 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233684662939 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354210332531 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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