write a letter to a building manager to provide bicycle parking at work.
Dear Mr. Shah,
I am writing for creating space in Pearl Avenue to park bicycles. At present cycle owners park offside and has risk of getting stolen.
As you know, there are many environment loving residents in our tower, who prefer using bi-cycles to commute but due to lack of parking space, they have to park it in pedestal footpath. Admittedly, this causes inconvenience to passers and tenants to use the space for walking. Astonishingly, it is true that our parking area is too small and there is no provision for bi-cycles to park. Hence, I request you to think of some space that can be allotted to cycles.
Moreover, using bi-cycles should be encouraged, but having no parking will discourage many people from cycling. The tank near the front entrance is unused from last 2 years. It would be great if the tank is knocked down and the area is utilized to park the cycles. This way the tenants would be motivated for using cycles as well as they would feel secure about parking.
I hope you would take favorable steps to provide cycle parking. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, you know, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82142857143 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47773824226 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8460776846 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6923076923 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120716696277 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432752972761 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450478245686 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857609030992 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055738240132 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.