Some people think that students who do not take a break in studies between the high school and university are at disadvantage compare to students who travel and work after high school before further continuation their education. Do you agree or disagree.
couple of dackeds back, there is no certain age limits to get educated. but in present era, students always have willing to get educated early to have some job and earn more money. forthermore, many people agreed that those pupil who do not have some break between their graduations and high schools have stumbling block as compare to those pupil who travel and work after high school before join graduation studies.
In current era, many students don't want to have break between their studies, they deem that if they take a pause between higher studies their willing to study may get distracted from studies. Sometimes it might happen that after couple of month of working students only attention is to earn money. forthermore, they fill old whil they attending a lacture with younger students.
On the other hand, students who have a break between studies, have some experience of job, they are aware the reality of the real word, they have some extra caricular activity that may help in future studies. if they do travel before graduation they feel refresh and their thinking capacity may expand because of jurny.
In conclusion, I partially agreed with that because may be some time break filles student old but experience came from the break may have more advantagies for future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99078341014 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31818763831 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566820276498 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3108655612 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306487127498 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117751401052 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113116842143 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18445147828 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855821165876 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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