In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some
people think that people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building
them with the same style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many people tend to build their house in different styles than the old style of
house in local areas. This trend of house’s architecture has evolved as a major concern of
modern society. Some belive that this tendency might gain more benefits, however, I’m of
the opinion that it’s cons overcome its pros.
The pros of this phenomenon, however, could not be denied. First, owners could design
based on their flavor and demand. They could adjust the number of rooms or add more
functional rooms such as a gym room, a theater room. The result is that owners could feel
comfortable and relax when they stay at a cozy house. The second plus point is that owner
could fix the house safer by installing more automatic fire alarm systems and optimising the
electric lines. This way will help to prevent any damage which could is uncontrolled.
I still believe this phenomenon will cause many cons much more than it’s pros. The main
one of cons is that the local become a mess with different styles of house appearing. While
everyone try to make their house become prominent this could lead to a destruction of the
whole area’s beauty. Moreover, another one of cons is that the cost for building a house
could be raised when its’ material are uncommon in the area. In term of a distinctive house,
it’s architecture might requires some not popular decor such as some trees or flower
which is not available in that place.
All in all, although this trend could brings the comfortable feeling and reach to the high level
of safety, It’s drawbacks might affect to the locals around and take a lot of cost. In the
future, the government should have some policies to limit the ability to build house based
on individual demands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: House
...ifferent styles than the old style of house in local areas. This trend of house&apo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Modern
...ure has evolved as a major concern of modern society. Some belive that this tendency...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...n more benefits, however, I'm of the opinion that it's cons overcome it...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Based
...be denied. First, owners could design based on their flavor and demand. They could ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Functional
...djust the number of rooms or add more functional rooms such as a gym room, a theater roo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Comfortable
... The result is that owners could feel comfortable and relax when they stay at a cozy hous...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Electric
...fire alarm systems and optimising the electric lines. This way will help to prevent an...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... help to prevent any damage which could is uncontrolled. I still believe this ph...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...ch more than it's pros. The main one of cons is that the local become a mess...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whole
...is could lead to a destruction of the whole area's beauty. Moreover, another o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
...is that the cost for building a house could be raised when its' material are u...
^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...ar decor such as some trees or flower which is not available in that place. All i...
^^^^^
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ar decor such as some trees or flower which is not available in that place. All i...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... All in all, although this trend could brings the comfortable feeling and reach to th...
^^^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Of
...e feeling and reach to the high level of safety, It's drawbacks might affec...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...imit the ability to build house based on individual demands.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01320132013 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46135153314 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3084621585 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173697053104 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682693327393 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117617940049 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556404593644 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963279847929 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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