In present time, fewer and fewer people walk on daily basis. What are the reasons for it and how can one encourage them to spend their time walking?
Due to modernisation, private vehicles has been increasing continousely. Therefore, people prefer less to walk and not use cycles. Nowadays fewer masses walk daily in each and every country. The essay will elaborate the reasons why is it happening so and solution of this issue with example in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, the prime reason of this is that, in today's world buying things is very easy and convenient because of home delivery option, people get different foods, clothes etcetera sitting at home. Thus, which makes them lazy and people do not go to market to buy products. Secondly, parents are purchasing cars, bikes for their childrens in the early age, which make the teenagers addicted towards the vehicle and most of the prefer to travel by private vehicle while for a short distance.
Moving forth, there are some solution. Primarily, Government of a particular country should restrict or may banned the use of private vehicles and the programs should be held to aware people about the drawbacks of not walking in daily routine. Moreover, the local council should build a path for walking in each city of country, so that individuals should walk on that path for a short distance.
So, the conclusion of this essay, is that, daily basis walk is necessary for a healthy life and for remaining away from several types of diseases.
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| 2020-01-23 | Arun sachar | 100 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97807017544 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55564421006 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7671809807 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.181818182 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222494689818 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794434109291 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622591893329 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130353694142 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305342747621 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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