The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

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The table displays the average monthly rainfall for the year in five cities of the world.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The table illustrates the annual average precipitation per month in 5 cities namely Hongkong, Tokyo, Jakarta, Cairo, and London. The scale is in mm.

Overall, Jakarta has the highest monthly average rainfall, while in Cairo is the lowest in comparison with other cities.

In the first quarter of the year, the average precipitation in Jakarta was 300 mm per month, which started to decrease in March to 21. The average monthly rainfall in Jakarta and was steadily falling till August and reached 60 mm. From September to December there were dramatic jump, 70 and 210 respectively.

At the beginning of the period, monthly precipitation was 24mm, which was rising with geometrical progression to August to 380 mm. After that, it was significantly decreasing and reached 34mm in December.

The average monthly rainfall in Tokyo showed the most precipitation in the summer months, where it was in the range 150 mm and 190 mm, while in the winter monthly rainfall was about 50 mm. The average rainfall in Cairo was about 3-4 mm, it reached its peak in August (27 mm). The precipitation in London was without significant fluctuation in the range between 45 mm and 80 mm per month.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 258, Rule ID: IN_JANUARY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on August'? This seems to be a day date.
Suggestion: on August
...o was about 3-4 mm, it reached its peak in August 27 mm. The precipitation in London was ...
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Line 17, column 275, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m, it reached its peak in August 27 mm. The precipitation in London was without sig...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01507537688 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80801574073 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527638190955 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4383939827 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129447835428 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057677780096 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451388569061 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847331807131 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247806734861 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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