Nowadays people get married and have kids in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
Nowadays, people’s lifestyles have been changed dramatically as a requirement of their hectic lifestyle. Late marriage has sparked a heated debate among people of societies. Although contested by many that this matter is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly constructive and positive in terms of economy and psychology by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined that marriage in older age can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From an economic standpoint, late marriage can provide the society with a boom in the economy. People in the age less than thirty are energetic and can work for a longer time which leads to a more productive society. As an example, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered single young people are more efficient and productive. Thus a late marriage could be considered a positive phenomenon in a society.
Within the realm of social psychology, a healthy society is the one with healthy children not only in the term of body health but also in terms of psychological health. Children raised under the stable economic situation are psychologically healthier than unprivileged ones. Parents who married over thirty have a more stable economic situation since they usually used their youth to develop their life financially. As a result, they can offer a safer and less stressful life to their children which are essential to raising a child psychologically healthy. This demonstrates the importance of late marriage.
In conclusion, marriage over thirty could provide the society with some positive effects such as an economic boost of the society and promotion of psychological health in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36727272727 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08937716048 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2720175694 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174336891151 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574659197048 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391131282232 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100111979314 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234073272439 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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