You were offered to join in a company but for some other reasons you can’t join there. Write a letter to the HR of the company. In your letter:
» Explain the reason why you are declining the offer
» Express you gratitude
» Explain you like your current job very much.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Hello Dear HR of company,
I am so glad to peresent to this company. I search a lot of time to find a company such as yours. I know this is so difficult to say that some issue cause me don't participant as employee. I would like to accept my applogize.
The space of company of is so frindly and was so happy to be with you but the following problem was main reason to stop. The first one, recently I have a child that make my time retricst than before and I should care him. The scound, I should migrate from first place and went to another place that is far from of company, so i should spend a lot of money evry day, therfore I prefare switch another company. thierd items that make me decline was salary, everyone know that we expect salary based on our experience, biu anforunatly I think my knowledge and salary wasn't coordinate and it make me sad and try to say no.
All in all, I like this company and frindly space, specialy my job was one of favariate work that I like to do. I appologize to write this letter. Be sure you are one of the best company in this country.
best Regards,
Jamal Azizbeigi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f time to find a company such as yours. I know this is so difficult to say that s...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...fficult to say that some issue cause me dont participant as employee. I would like t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... cause me dont participant as employee. I would like to accept my applogize. T...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...participant as employee. I would like to accept my applogize. The space of comp...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...icst than before and I should care him. The scound, I should migrate from first pla...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r place that is far from of company, so i should spend a lot of money evry day, t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thierd
...rfore I prefare switch another company. thierd items that make me decline was salary, ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...runatly I think my knowledge and salary wasnt coordinate and it make me sad and try t...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...edge and salary wasnt coordinate and it make me sad and try to say no. All in a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
... of the best company in this country. best Regards, Jamal Azizbeigi.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2476635514 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34946374965 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4699618412 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130937385633 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05081795945 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051048465033 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827222109969 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358979240045 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.