The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree and employer s reasons for hiring them Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150

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The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The pie diagrams illustrate research outcomes on reasons for getting Mastership on Business Administration and why employers recruit MBA graduates.

Overall, there are considered 4 reasons to obtain an MBA degree. The most significant reason for studying in the course of Business administration is better job opportunities, while the least important factor is the ability to help others. Employers pay attention to five factors, namely personality, presentation and appearance, networking, qualification, and hard skills.

65 percent of all MBA graduates chose their degree in order to get better job opportunities. a quarter of respondents told that they decided to study to get a higher qualification and perform their work better. Personal development and the ability to help others were less significant for MBA students and reached 12 percent and 8 percent respectively.

Half of the employers recruit MBA graduates because of their personality and knowledge, while presentation and connections get 20 percent each. The least important for companies is the qualification of future employees.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
... order to get better job opportunities. a quarter of respondents told that they d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80487804878 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37843948608 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615853658537 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5350063945 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159262193037 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697947969587 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400681855614 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103554349163 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139890147369 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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