Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane.Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:where and when you lost your bagwhat your bag looks

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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane.

Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:

where and when you lost your bag

what your bag looks like

what its contents were

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the bag which I misplaced in the flight.

Let me explain you in more detail. I am Tim Frank, recently flew through your airlines from London to Vancouver. My flight number was AE665 and seat number was J 15. When I reached hotel, I found my cross bag was missing and after recalling, I came to know that it might have been misplaced in the flight.

To locate it easily, will help you with bag description. It was a grey colour in which initials of my first and last name are embedded on it. Also, you will find a marvel toy is attached to the chain of the bag. Most probably

I would have forgotten in cabin luggage compartment.

There are some documents which the bag contains. However, there are 2 pendrives which contains my project related work. I would be grateful if you could locate the bag and courier it to me on the residential address mentioned below.

I will be waiting for your positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Tim Frank

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to Vancouver. My flight number was AE665 and seat number was J 15. When I reached...
^^
Line 13, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to the chain of the bag. Most probably I would have forgotten in cabin luggage ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64673913043 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4680316637 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2925362936 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0714285714 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289081449768 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922619779524 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693445099564 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123618848389 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583266117766 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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