You have just returned home after living with a family in an English-speaking country for six months. You now realize that you left a small bag of personal possessions in your room. Write to the family describing the things you left behind. Ask them to send some or all of them to you. Offer to cover the coasts.
Dear Alice and Bob,
how are you? I have arrived Dhaka last night and it is surprising that I kept recalling the wonderful six months spent with you during the whole journey. Your hospitality and amiable personality made my visit one of the most pleasant experience of my life. would you believe that I even forgot to pack the blue pouch where I used to keep my driving licence and id cards?
As far I remember, I have left the bag on the tiny table next to the window at the room I was staying. I cannot drive my car and unable to borrow book from my university library untill I have the items on the bag. Today I was at the university campus when I realised about the missing pouch just before entering in to the library to collect a book that I need for my assignment. As you may understand how important these items are, I would like to request you to post the pouch as soon as possible to the address written on the next page. Please only send the documents as the small toys inside the pouch are not necessary to have back!
Once you confirm me about the cost associated with the parcel service, I would like to transfer the money to your account. I would appreciate if you accept it.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Kind regards,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alice and Bob, how are you? I have arrived Dhaka last n...
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Suggestion: Would
...he most pleasant experience of my life. would you believe that I even forgot to pack ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o keep my driving licence and id cards? As far I remember, I have left the bag o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t. I would appreciate if you accept it. Hope to hear from you soon. Kind r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hear from you soon. Kind regards, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4170212766 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30045560075 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6563063498 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252040978324 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927919156201 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510724510368 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12680945314 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647826185424 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.