You have just returned home after living with a family in an English-speaking country for six months. You now realize that you left a small bag of personal possessions in your room. Write to the family describing the things you left behind. Ask them to send some or all of them to you. Offer to cover the coasts.
Dear ABC,
I hope you and your family are all well. I would take this opportunity to again thank you for your warm hospitality during my six months stay in London. However, I am writing this letter to inform that I left my black sports bag at your place by mistake.
It is a small bag from Adidas Company and contains my sportswear, wrist watch and a gaming gadget. Though it does not contain many things but the few items it has are precious to me as I have grown fondness towards them. For example, for every morning run I always carry the wrist watch to time my run and measure the distance covered. Without it, I somehow lack the motivation to exercise. Had it been cheap, I would have bought a new one, but I had already spent a fortune on it. So, I humbly request you to send the bag as a courier to my address, and I would be ever so grateful to you.
Needless to say the courier cost would be borne by me. For that I have already transferred the required amount to your bank account.
Thank you so much in advance and give my warm regards to your family.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...in many things but the few items it has are precious to me as I have grown fondness...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36538461538 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28741087711 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3843026875 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8461538462 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240404490821 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779124059956 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635787771491 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137756639319 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678238390109 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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