A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- Thank her for the present and say why you like it.
- Describe some other presents that you received
- explain some of the things you did on your birthday.
Dear Jay,
how are you? I was organising the birthday present I received yesterday and couldn't resist myself from writing you how much your gift lifted up my mood! Thank you for choosing such a thoughtful item. I liked the package because you found the two books I was looking for last few weeks and the blue earrings I found extremely classy. I must say, your idea of wrapping the items with ribbons and chocolates at the top made me giggle!
Apart from your lovely gift, I got bag, perfume, photo frames and a kitten this year from my friends and family. are you surprised reading about the kitten? Yes, I felt the same. this is from my younger brother, he knew I couldn't have a pet because of my mom. but now, since I have moved out, he thought about fulfilling my dream. I am so happy to be honest, but at the same time little concern on how to take care of it as I will be at work most of the days.
this year I could not do much to celebrate the occasion due to the flu I am having. However, my parents came down to see me with cake and home cooked meal. so, we had a family lunch and watched a movie at home in the afternoon.
I hope you will come by this weekend as I am planning to have a post birthday celebration on Saturday evening. do let me know if you have any allergens.
With love,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jay, how are you? I was organising the birthd...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...rthday present I received yesterday and couldnt resist myself from writing you how much...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...n this year from my friends and family. are you surprised reading about the kitten?...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...about the kitten? Yes, I felt the same. this is from my younger brother, he knew I c...
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Line 9, column 223, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...s is from my younger brother, he knew I couldnt have a pet because of my mom. but now, ...
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Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...I couldnt have a pet because of my mom. but now, since I have moved out, he thought...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...will be at work most of the days. this year I could not do much to celebrate t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... see me with cake and home cooked meal. so, we had a family lunch and watched a mo...
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Line 13, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tched a movie at home in the afternoon. I hope you will come by this weekend as ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...rthday celebration on Saturday evening. do let me know if you have any allergens. ...
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Line 21, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you have any allergens. With love, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2431372549 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23110718985 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5209892184 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1333333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215630553081 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630504646385 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820253038757 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12293314513 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113342600604 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.