Your landlord wants to increase the rent. Write a letter to him telling him why you think rent should not be increased and what will you do if it's increased.
Dear Mr. Ahmed,
My name is Safaa, and I am one of your renters in a building you own since 2010, it is building number 45 at al Marwah street. I heared about the rent' raise; I am really unpleased with it, and there are several reasons behind that.
I think that the rent should remain the same as it is, as you know that it is an old builbing and not only it needs a constant servicing but also it has elecricity issues. Moreover, almost all the renters in our neighbourhood are paying a fewer rent than we are.
I have to say that if the rent will be raised, I will leave the apartment bythe end of this month. furthermore, I spoke other renters in our bulding and most of them will do the same.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Should be any quiries, you can contact me on my number 02257895554.
Sincerely yours,
Safaa Hussein
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you know that it is an old builbing and not only it needs a constant servicing b...
^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... the apartment bythe end of this month. furthermore, I spoke other renters in our bulding a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32298136646 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38399301749 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3952594601 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22323783252 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796310146863 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045462805925 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128236692243 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260547552402 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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