Tourism has negative impacts on tourist areas.
What are the impacts?
How can damaging impacts be lessened?
Keeping the environment in a brilliant condition is valuable for every country on the planet. Every year the number of people who go abroad is increasing which leads to polluting the most famous travel destinations. This essay will discover problems related to sustainability such as limitation or contamination and suggest visible viable solutions to mitigate the affection on tourist areas.
The environmental pollution problem has been spreading around the world since people started exploring the world. There is a lot of tourist destinations such as New York City in the United States of America, the Colosseum in Rome, pyramids of Maya in Mexico and many others that attract travelers. The authorities of New York City restricted access to the Statue of Liberty because a growing number of visitors are prevented to keep historical monument clean and safe. Moreover, if the New York City government had not tackled the problem, the symbol of freedom would have been under the menace. In other words, the countries that are having possess famous travel points should involve the administration to control of tourist areas.
Having popular destinations effect on opulent countries as much as less tourist countries. Traffic jams and vehicle exhausts exhaust fumes are the crucial issues that require finding optimal solutions. The American Bureau of Statistics revealed the information about car rental that grew in by fifteen percent by last year. Due to this fact, the number of toxic elements in the air will be increasing rapidly. This is why rental companies should limit providing vehicles, for example, adding new regulations of issuance.
In conclusion, the government, travelers and local people should prevent deteriorating tourist areas from being wasted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46931407942 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82295696106 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642599277978 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1133911496 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0621569745483 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210451982537 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264296237364 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424069754853 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154622629093 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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