Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect their environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Currently people face with a number of the global environmental problems and one of the most considerable seems to be a water contamination, which without doubts influences on the whole biosphere conditions including animals and people. This essay will shed some light on possible reasons of this issue and provide some effects that they have on the fauna.
First of all, it appears that one of the factors for pollution of natural water pools is the emissions from cars and factories inside of the cities. In this case pollutant particles of gases from vehicles and plants settle on the ground and then they are absorbed into the soil with raining water. Then it goes to the aquifers and run-off to the rivers, lakes and seas polluting them. This example illustrates an implicit deterioration of water sources. Another possible cause could be in direct dumping of waste into the rivers, which are prevalent among the industrial producers and for urban sewerage system. The clean water from the nearest supplying areas is often utilized in the production process in different industries. Thus it becomes tainted and it is thrown back to the rivers or seas without filtration.
However, this wide-spreaded practice contributes to inevitable consequences on the wildlife and human community. Firstly, an increase in the lack of safe for drinking water in the wild areas, which might be polluted by the uncleaned ground water, leads to the habitat loss of the animals. In seeking for the appropriate water they may leave their home places and cope with several hazards on this way IN LIGHT OF SEVERE WEATHER CONDITIONS CONFRONTING THEM AND other species, EATING them. Secondly, people On their own struggle from A NUMBER OF diseases, SUCH as digestive and immune system illnesses that ARE caused by DETRIMENT DERIVED FROM POLLUTED water.
It is true that water in cities are gone through the purification methods, nevertheless, in the modern industrial progress there are some kind of dangerous substances, which are hard to BE CLEARED OFF.
Finally, it is logical to conclude that the clean water supplement is vital for living on the Earth. Perhaps people should be considering about needed measures preventing the effects of this problem and weakening the possible origins.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, kind of, such as, first of all, it is true, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1832884097 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70308881478 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4723473663 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.1875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264437531699 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787712367742 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320456753949 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12968493239 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575502525859 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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