Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is said that publishing all information in scientific research, business and academic world is a brilliant decision. However, some people believe that citizens should not know all information in all fields due to the importance and value of its. In this essay, I will discuss both side of this argument and give my opinion which is some information should be kept secretly.
To begin with, sharing as much information as possible has many benefits which are solving difficult situation and impartiality. Firstly, if governments and businessman decide to public the information, everyone may have the knowledge at that subject that could help them to tackle the problems sometime. Moreover, it is not equal if there are only chosen people to gain those knowledge while the world's main target is to give the equality for all people and countries.
Turning to the other side of the argument, many people think that keeping essential and valuable information is not wrong choice because of two main reasons. The first one is the discipline. For example, when the information about virus that infects through the atmosphere people are breathing now, many people will be scared and impulsive, which can make the situation deteriorate. The other reason that support for this decision is that scientists do not actually know whether the information is one hundred percent right. As a result, it is not scientist who venture to public everything. This is why I believe there should be secret information that is known by people in their own field.
In conclusion, each side has its advantages that have been mentioned above to support the thought. Nevertheless I prefer the second side to the first one due to the reasons have been suggested.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...t is not equal if there are only chosen people to gain those knowledge while the world...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'those knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; those knowledges
...if there are only chosen people to gain those knowledge while the worlds main target is to give...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...mentioned above to support the thought. Nevertheless I prefer the second side to the first o...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue to the reasons have been suggested.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09059233449 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76583074568 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4864128237 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281438273453 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848090442968 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075591862323 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145043027759 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10705638667 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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