It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Talent may be made with a variety of elements that most people wish to find out the roots causing different levels of ability in, for instance, sport, art or music. One of the common arguments is the influence of natural genes and training on human talent.
The majority of people rely on the idea that a special ability is attributed to an individual's nature. Everyday, we could see a wealth of talent all throughout the world such as mathematical geniuses , sport stars or gifted musicians. Those are people who master remarkable skills that are not for anyone. In other words, these gifted techniques stand them out among those who are trained to gain skills.
However, others believe every child can adequately learn to gain ability. There is no doubt that education plays a crucial role in discovering children’s strengths and weaknesses. Based on them, the children can be taught more further in a particular field together with teachers or parents. Thus, their skill is gradually elaborated until they can flexibly utilize it.
In my opinion, some people are probably inherited via genes, which facilitate a certain skill that allows them to excel while others must take time to recognise their talent and attempt to reach a comparable level. Nevertheless, talent must be fostered day by day to bear fruits some day. Good musicians, artists or exceptional sport stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without natural ability, it would result in lack of attractiveness or uniqueness. What if there is no good training, children would never exploit and develop themself.
In summary, I strongly believe that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art, sport, then some natural talent is required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in summary, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11486486486 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65193358892 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638513513514 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5269971747 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318541618307 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839597919239 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749080930199 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171610306537 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639144734459 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.