You have just bought a Walkman from a shop at the airport but found a fault with it after reaching home. Write to the shop for a solution.
Dear Sir/madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention that, the walkman I bought yesterday from your store at the airport is faulty. I would like you to please replace the product.
The walkman I purchased on 29th January, was a gift for my daughter. As i was running late for my daughter birthday, I straight way took the product and left for home or else I would have first checked it at your store and then leave. Unfortunately as she tried to play it, the play button pops back and the audio stops. We tried it with variuos other disc thinking that it could be becaise of the faulty disc but it happened with all of them.
Therefore, I would request you to replace this product as this issue seem to be irrepairable. However, I am sending this walkman back and appreciate if the replacement is done at the earliest.
Hope you will to do the needful.
Yours Faithfully,
Abhishek Agrawal
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| 2020-02-13 | abhishek1408 | 73 | view |
| 2020-02-13 | abhishek1408 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...January, was a gift for my daughter. As i was running late for my daughter birthd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59509202454 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56008381341 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631901840491 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0066661377 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193815623109 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630364349837 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504737339993 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108522548664 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556018929658 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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