Countries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy similar products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that several nations are becoming similar because current generation is able to purchase anything and everything across the globe. There is a widespread notion that this is positive phenomenon, thus this essay will dilate the positive aspects in detail.
There are numerous arguments in the favor of the stance; out of all most preponderant one is that with the increase in the globalization the entire world has become a global village. This is to say; most of the high fashion brands and newly invented equipment are available to the general public across the world right on the day of product launch. Not only has it increased the awareness about the product but also increase the economy through the trades. As a longitudinal study conducted by the eminent journalists of France in 2014 demonstrates that there has been an exponential rise in economy ever since this country started importing and exporting goods. Therefore, business brings more harmonious relationships among countries, which leads to the positive development.
Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned proposition is technology and internet. At present, it plays an extensively imperative role to bring oneness among the nations. With the increase in number of digital nomads, it is easier for them to explore things online. Besides, there has been a paradigm shift in the number of online websites available today, which aid masses to purchase the products that are popular especially among the celebrities. There are myriad of companies that provide the exact replica of clothes and products that these personalities use at cheaper price. A salient example of this attribute is illustrated by a magazine in India stating, Cannes Film Festival attires that are worn by the actors become most popular and first choice of the young generation in the country. Hence, it will not be incorrect to infer that internet helps the countries to uniform.
To conclude, there are less barrier among the nations now, as people are able to buy similar products, I opinion this is a positive development because of the globalization, countries not only improve the awareness and new inventions but also enhance the business relationships. But will it remain a positive development in future, stays the question?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...invented equipment are available to the general public across the world right on the day of pr...
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Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: EXACT_REPLICA[1]
Message: Use simply 'replica'
Suggestion: replica
...re myriad of companies that provide the exact replica of clothes and products that these pers...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'barriers'?
Suggestion: barriers
...niform. To conclude, there are less barrier among the nations now, as people are ab...
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Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...t will it remain a positive development in future, stays the question?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23958333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86508991733 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544270833333 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.268747131 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251939253496 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631713091132 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578564091409 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154724022222 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675046814309 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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