At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do you think advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of nations involving young ones to a country as compared to the older generation. There is a widespread notion that this phenomenon has more benefits as compared to its drawback, hence this essay will dilate how advantages suppress its disadvantages.
There are numerous arguments in the favor of the advantage of this trend, out of all the most preponderant one is that youths are the future of any nation as they are highly progressive and creative, which not only lead towards the development of the society but also bring more prosperity in a nation. This is to say- when most of the facilities of a country are invested on young minds they come up with better researches and innovations, their ideas not only bring new inventions but also manage other aspects of a society. As a longitudinal study conducted my eminent researcher of Japan states that there has been an exponential rise in the progress of the country ever since most of the sector started involving youngsters in every sector. Hence, involving younger masses devote betterment of the country.
On the contrary, there are some disadvantages with the aforementioned preposition, first and foremost is that young adults are less experienced. Indeed they are mostly eager to take up new challenges in life, yet they might fail to go for the right decision. Without the assistance of the older people young minds are rudderless and cannot progress properly. A salient example of this attribute is an NGO in Delhi, India which was started by middle aged man for the education of the girl child; however current information reveals that now a great number of young adults are working with him for this noble cause. Therefore, it will not be incorrect to infer that new generation can evolve better with the help of older ones.
To conclude, involving young people and giving them preference in a country has become a new phenomenon, however I second with the view that youngsters do show extensive growth with their ideas and hard work and have more pros as compared to the cons, but contribution and assistance of the older people cannot be discarded entirely. But will this trend remain a progressive option in future? Stays a question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94072164948 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76794404598 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538659793814 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7899852879 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.928571429 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237339754461 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734015090038 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587517546764 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147880266727 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047505157812 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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