TPO 24
The lecture and reading are about evidence found from fossils of Tyrannosaurus. The author mentions that the fossils contain exceptional materials. The lecturer challenges the announcement made by author. He is of the opinion that these explanations are contradictory.
To begin with, the author argues that there was many elastic, soft particles inside the channels, which is likely to be residual of the actual blood vessel of the dinosaur. Nonetheless, this particular argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims the residual cannot be requisite telltale because bacteria may have colonized in hollows from which soft tissues were found. Therefore, specimen is probably of the microorganism but the dinosaur.
Secondly, according to the reading passage, bone has been containing red blood cells, but lecturer refuted this. As he stated, fossils revealed from surrounding area was not containing cells. Moreover, the substance is perhaps just some reddish stuff rather than iron of the blood.
Finally, lecturer noted that there is another interpretation about the fibrous protein. To be more particular, the most ancient evidence of collagen is dated around hundred thousand years ago, so the idea that this fossil's age is twenty million is controversial. He elaborates on this idea by bringing up the point that the protein is probably from other contemporary sources such as human skin. Moreover, professor stated that clarification that this is remain of scholars who found fossils.
- Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible Fortunately in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition What do you think is the best way to stay healthy Getting exercise on a regular basis Eating healthy foo 90
- TPO 23 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In today s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct 80
- TPO 34 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone online games and social networking Web site 80
- During our careers we work with many different kinds of people All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits In your opinion which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker a serious attitude regarding their work 73
- TPO 32 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... fossils contain exceptional materials. The lecturer challenges the announcement ma...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ording to the reading passage, bone has been containing red blood cells, but lecturer refuted t...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... fossils revealed from surrounding area was not containing cells. Moreover, the substance is perha...
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Line 7, column 456, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... stated that clarification that this is remain of scholars who found fossils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51082251082 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92130501242 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9664111804 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8666666667 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271736532724 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749546632117 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646620644543 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15232273565 0.162205337803 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805226207418 0.0443174109184 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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