In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
what is your opinion about this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are more homes required and the only option left for building new houses is in the villages. Few people are in an opinion that it is vital to safeguard the countryside and construction of new buildings should not be allowed there. I feel that countryside should not be allowed for any future construction. However, the current housing structure with in the cities should be changed to accommodate more people.
In the past two decades, the job opportunities in cities has increased because of various factors, which has led to increase of population. This mass increase in population has led to more need of shelter. For example, in Hyderabad, a lot of Information Technology (IT) companies are being established providing employment to various people and hence the employees from different regions are coming here, which has caused a high demand of more housing and there is no land in the city for new houses. Hence few people argue that countryside should be used for new construction.
On the contrary, villages are key for farming and producing food. If this farming land is used for construction and no food is produced it would become challenging for all the human beings. For instance, a survey conducted by Food Corporation of India (FCI) has confirmed that current farms available are producing only about 110% of the rice required for the current population and if any drought is caused because of natural calamities, we would run shortage of rice by 3 months. Further construction of houses in villages should be banned.
To summarise, considering that countryside is more important for food production, the cities should be modified to accommodate more people by constructing high rise apartments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 500, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... is no land in the city for new houses. Hence few people argue that countryside shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, for example, for instance, i feel, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1134751773 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94443281864 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503546099291 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9408832677 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291425547464 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115852826029 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860163008632 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18366035805 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583895385258 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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