The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
The two charts below reveal some aspect of studying when people already having a job. while the first chart demonstrates reasons people advance supplementary course, the second chart shows their thought on dividing fee.
it is evident that most people participate in a class because of their interest or enhance their specific knowledge. having the same percentage of being attracted by courses, 40% people agree that the amount of money on studying should be paid by individual.
In the first chart, it is clear that personal fascinating is the top answer on dragging people to education. Closely behind, with 2% lower, evaluating knowledge is the reason people sign in. Oppose to that, the least reason people thought about studying is being socialized. Three other reasons that have approximately equal vote, which only half of those of peak reason, are whether it is beneficial for their contemporary job or simply because of their self-excitement.
The pie chart shown another aspect in study, the financial issue. while 40% adult agree that fees should be paid by the one taking the course individually, less than 10% of that, the second group state the opinion that the cost should be funded by the employers. Last group, with one fourth of people concur that taxpayer should cover the cost.
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- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adults education should be shared Write a report for a university lecturer desc 95
- Cambridge book 1 test 1 The charts below show results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared Write a report for a unive 30
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...studying should be paid by individual. In the first chart, it is clear that per...
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...ersonal fascinating is the top answer on dragging people to education. Closely be...
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...mply because of their self-excitement. The pie chart shown another aspect in st...
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...r aspect in study, the financial issue. while 40% adult agree that fees should be pai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08411214953 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60241360186 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5419433012 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9090909091 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2831120201 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101222024124 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592019768608 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164251092074 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698883741647 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.