Living in a country where you have to sepak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problem. to waht extend to you agree or disagress
Now-a-days people are interested to learn a foreign language because it improves a plethora of
opportunities around the world. Some people argue that learning a foreign language increases
social and practical issues whereas some people say that it improves knowledge about a specific
non-native language. In my opinion, I disagree that acquiring a new language affects our
society as well as people.
Firstly, Some people in the country speak non-native language than native language. Parents should
encourage their children to take native language as major subject so that they should consider foreign
language as the secondary one. For instance, If children give importance to its native langauage they can
explore the same knowledge in foreign language so that it explores international culture and adapts any
situations when they start a career in abroad and they won't forget their native language as it will not
create any social issues
Secondly, People get involved more to explore their ability in getting more choices in jobs so that they
can attend more interviews if they learn one or more non-native languages. For example, Today we have a
myriad of jobs available around the world. If we have knowledge about your field and also you are good at english,
you can get more jobs by passing IELTS and PTE exams. We can avoid other practial issues by exploring our knowledge
in international levels. We can get more scholarships which help to study abroad with minimum amount of money.
In conclusion, Although people think that, learning a non-native language creates some soical and non-social issues,
it is very essential to learn other country languages to avoid spending more money for studying as compared
to our country and the future generations think out of the box when they study in outside of the country.
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- Firstly according to contemporary ages modern cultures are been changed and been similar when compared to the past we find more positive development than negative development furthermore disadvantage are also considered to be worth it 77
- many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves some people think that this is a good thing while others think that it has disadvantages discuss both views and give your own opinion 55
- Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field as long as they are playing well Do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25838926174 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64885011252 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523489932886 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.038102595 50.4703680194 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.454545455 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.25397266985 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.12807881773 460% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152207721696 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654082700597 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318066944408 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535477475871 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222397142296 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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