In education and employment some people work harder than others.
Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
It is true that several people put extra effort into study and work than others. Some people work harder than others because that is the only way for them to build a better life. However, working hard all the time is not a positive thing for our lives, and it can bring negative consequences.
People may have different reasons to work harder. I believe that some of us have no choice, but prioritize educational and professional life. For example, if you come from a family which has no financial condition to pay your studies or even provide the basics, in fact, as a human being you would try to find a job opportunity. In this case being employed would allow you to help your family and also pay your studies. In addition, sometimes all you learn while growing up is that you need to work, earn your own money to accomplish all you want.
While it is true that working hard can bring many advantages, such as increasing your knowledge, promotion opportunity, and a better salary. On the other hand, over working without any limit can create negative consequences. For instance, your health may get affected leading to sickness such as, heart diseases due to stress, nervous conditions, fatigue and lack of sleep. Secondly, you may not have enough time to spend with your beloved ones, giving the impression that the most essential matter is your job and nothing else. In reality, it is very important to know how to manage time, not forgetting how important your peace of mind and family is. Finally, employers tend to take advantage of their employees, knowing that they would do anything to keep their occupation, working extra hours, going out of their way doing anything that the job requires expecting for a promotion or a salary increase. As a result, sometimes you may feel disappointed for all the dedication given.
In conclusion, while some people work and study harder than others without a choice.
As a matter of fact, it is important to keep balance between personal and professional life, setting up limits to not affect anyone around us as any other area of our lives.
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| 2020-02-26 | caroll.drigues | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8044077135 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55149367679 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550964187328 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7067348604 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9411764706 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303929567746 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117724225213 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135825771369 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223537461715 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169588748571 0.056905535591 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.