Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individuals people so?
It is undeniable that nowadays people are harming our planet. This essay will discuss how the damage is caused, as well as the actions the Governments and individuals can take to protect our environment.
In my view, there are several ways in which people contaminate the environment. Firstly, most of the time people prefer to drive contributing to air pollution. In addition, the more cars are driven, the more carbon dioxide is produced. Secondly, factories are also the main problem producing a lot of waste. Furthermore, there are individuals throwing rubbish in inappropriate places, such as the river. Sadly, their reckless actions make the river a toxic place for fish and other river inhabitants.
Governments can take certain actions to reduce environmental issues. For instance, improvements in public transportation. Reliable, clean, and safe, so then population will feel encouraged to use them instead of driving their private cars. Moreover, introduce laws to limit emissions from factories and also waste reduction. Therefore, if a company produces more pollution than the permitted threshold, it will be fined.
Apart from the governments, individuals can also take responsibility for the impact they cause towards the environment. For example, instead of using plastic bags from the supermarket people could take their own reusable bags to do groceries, not only but also, choose ecofriendly products such as, reusable coffee cups, compostable bin liners, and biodegradable dental floss. Additionally, people should use public transportation often or walk more, so that pollution that comes from vehicles can be minimized.
In conclusion, individuals and governments can certainly make more effort in order to reduce the negative effects on the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62730627306 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10418309213 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1793554738 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7058823529 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5882352941 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188064624107 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057161954053 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053328034392 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109943754436 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312441727403 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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