You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding accommodation arrangement for your visit.
In your letter, you should tell:
• introduce yourself and your company
• ask availability of their rooms
• tell him/her that your every arrangement and needs
I am writing this letter to have a staying arrangement in your hotel.
Let me first introduce to myself, I am working as general manager in Tata Consultancy services a renowned multinational company. Our company keeps on organizing the meeting and seminars at different places around the globe. Next week a training has been organized at Mumbai and I urgently need a suitable accommodation.
I require a room for 3 persons as my wife and young child are also accompanying me. We basically require a room with both single and double bed so that it will be convenient for the three of us to have a sound sleep at the night. Please confirm me about the availability of the room along with as early as possible on my mobile number 000000000.
Please be sure that room have proper lighting and my children is a keen reader. Clean drinking water and spacious wash room along with a television in the room is the necessity. Apart from this we require the pick up and drop in facility from the airport, also make sure to provide the healthy lunch and breakfast at proper time, dinner is not require because we will prefer to have it outside while visiting different places around.
Your faithfully
Maninder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'suitable accommodation'.
Suggestion: suitable accommodation
...organized at Mumbai and I urgently need a suitable accommodation. I require a room for 3 persons as my ...
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Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...breakfast at proper time, dinner is not require because we will prefer to have it outsi...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72985781991 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68673148804 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4224944635 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133145634727 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644457720007 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904272158165 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103472635632 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112272705727 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.