Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people are of the opinion that the government should increase the legal age for driving to reduce the accidents on road, others believe that it is not the best way to improve safety. From my perspective, both of views are able to accept because of the following reasons.
Firstly, it is clear that there is a lot of road accidents nowadays that caused by most people who is legal enough to drive. In Vietnam, drivers just are allowed to use a car when they are enough eighteen years old, but in other countries such as US, Korea or Japan, that is sixteen years old. According to statistics, there were 6.4 per cent of total accidents caused by young drivers who have not experience for driving a car or motorbike. Therefore, the governments should be encouraged to increase the lawful age to drive. Particularly some people contend that rise the age to twenty first.
Secondly, it cannot denied that not only increasing the driver’s age can become the best way to improve safety on road but also there are many different ways. For an popular example, the government should raise awareness of drivers by news and internet. In addition, drivers should have some effective driving tests to make sure that they can use their car or motorbike safely.
In summary, it is necessary that the government should prevent the accidents on road with another solutions. Others, rising the legal driving age is also one of the effective ways to protect the safe road.
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- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...ts caused by young drivers who have not experience for driving a car or motorbike. Therefo...
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Suggestion: twenty-first
...ome people contend that rise the age to twenty first. Secondly, it cannot denied that no...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...prove safety on road but also there are many different ways. For an popular example, the gover...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... safely. In summary, it is necessary that the government should prevent the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81422924901 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50082396708 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1835598028 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327690090924 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121297226871 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986899284841 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209292409237 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470583603688 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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