Nowadays many family have both parents working, some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while other think that children centres provide the best care. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Taking care of children is nowadays biggest issue for parents because of their hectic schedule. some people think that grandparents should take care of the children while other says children centres are the best for the children.In this essay,I will discuss both view and give my opinion.
Grandparents give their grandchildren unconditional love in a different different way and they take extra care of their grandchildren. For instance,they provide different food to the children sometimes they buy a clothes and toys for them. They also take extra care of the child health. Moreover the grandparents are experienced because they faced a lot of situation in their life so they are prepared for any situation.
on the other hand, There are lots of children centres are available around us. children centres are more developed nowadays and they help the kids to grow with lots of knowledge. Firstly children centres provide children a basic education about the language. Moreover they also arrange the different activities from which children can learn counting numbers. Secondly they have more number of children so children can learn how to communicate and they also make their friends at the early age.
In my opinion, it is good to take care of our blood by our own blood. so I prefer that grandparents take care of their grandchildren.
To conclude, it is good if the parents take care of the children because in this way they make stronger bond between them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07818930041 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7494578313 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2582151142 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35483466857 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13948882194 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950453632787 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21696948612 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127641597016 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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