Write a letter to a boss who is visiting your country for the first time.
- Tell him the best time of the year to come.
- What places they could visit
- Invite them to come to your house
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to your proposed visit to my country. I am extremely delighted to hear that you and your family are coming.I would like to suggest you that you should come in the month of November and December,During which the climate is very good.
In India,there are many seeing places. But I would like to know likely duration of your stay over here,so I could plan for trip.The Taj Mahal in Agra and the Golden Temple in Amritsar wroth visiting. Every person who are coming from outside abroad they All go there. I would like to tell you that we should go for the statue of unity. It has become new and a statue is one of the highest in the world.I am sure that you would enjoy every moment of being here.
I would be very happy if you stay with us. I would like to show you all the places near my home town. Could you please send me all details so I have I can arrange all the things.
I look forward to receive your reply.
Kind regards,
Nidhi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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...ar that you and your family are coming.I would like to suggest you that you shou...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ar that you and your family are coming.I would like to suggest you that you shou...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , During
...e in the month of November and December,During which the climate is very good. In ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...h the climate is very good. In India,there are many seeing places. But I would lik...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...w likely duration of your stay over here,so I could plan for trip.The Taj Mahal in ...
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...stay over here,so I could plan for trip.The Taj Mahal in Agra and the Golden Temple...
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...Temple in Amritsar wroth visiting. Every person who are coming from outside abroa...
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...atue is one of the highest in the world.I am sure that you would enjoy every mome...
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...uld enjoy every moment of being here. I would be very happy if you stay with u...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould be very happy if you stay with us. I would like to show you all the places n...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...ange all the things. I look forward to receive your reply. Kind regards, Nidhi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48269394235 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613756613757 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4400271082 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158114172482 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550413681515 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536805082718 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099967385325 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561365147445 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.