Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists and instead of locals.
Why is this happening?
What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more?
In recent days, it is found that there is a huge increase in the number of foreigners paying a visit to museums and historical places rather than local people. This is because it has nothing new to offer and can be solved by encouraging schools and colleges to include it as part of educational trips.
People are more interested to travel to different places or countries rather than exploring their surroundings. One major reason people love to travel is to release stress or break from the daily routine. Museums and historical locations lack fun and entertainment, as a result of which people would not like to travel to these places more than once or twice. For example, a recent survey stated that museums and historical monuments are losing charm and originality because of poor maintenance.
This can be resolved by encouraging and educating young youths about the importance of cherishing their cultural heritage and museums. So it is vital to include this as a mandatory subject for high school students to pass the academic year. Additionally, volunteers should be made to organise events at regular intervals with some entertainment factors to attract local visitors. Thus, by making some ammendments we can bring a change and increase the interest of the local people.
To recapitulate, although tourist helps in increasing the economy, it is indispensable for locals to have knowledge and interest in the museums and cultural locations. we can safeguard the interest of local people to pay a visit through means of education and youths.
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- Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists and instead of locals Why is this happening What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more 56
- Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists and instead of locals Why is this happening What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88656754693 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4880923444 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266754804111 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896994688601 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623135418796 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163416659206 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522915869934 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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