There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am Fujiwara Tsuyoshi, one of residents of Tokyo BayCity. I along with the other people of the area have been enjoying the bus service from your company, known as Tokyo BayCity Koutsu, for a long time. Lately, however, there seems some problems are occuring with your bus facilities which has given rise to doubt in people's mind about the reliability of your services.
For a long time, the buses from your company are known for the convenience they provide and how timely they are to let people reach their destination on time. Recently, not only the comfortability of vehicles is going down but also their time of arrival and departure, leading to numerous complains from people. As regarding the comfort, seats of buses are strating to look more and more ugly day with sometimes visible torn of clothing from them. On the other hand, your buses usually used to arrive at nearby 8 and 9'o clock with a half an hour break in between them, however, now the gap has risen to nearly one hour. In addition to this, their engines seems to have become obsolete as the buses covers only half the distance in the same time, in which, these used to travel more than double the miles.
These problems have effected my schedule as I often get late for my work and have even got warnings from my boss for such late arrival. Therefore, I kindly request you to either bring in the latest model buses or change the engines and other things responsible for the buses and refurbish them completely.
Yours Sincerely, Date :- 12-03-2020
Fujiwara Tsuyoshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'clock' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'clocks', 'clox'.
Suggestion: clocks; clox
...ually used to arrive at nearby 8 and 9o clock with a half an hour break in between th...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ish them completely. Yours Sincerely, Date :- 12-03-2020 Fujiwara Tsuyoshi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, regarding, so, therefore, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74264705882 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35441964674 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.8746680843 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.272727273 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184421755257 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678562333784 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752356982624 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118115440926 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863680776108 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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