The charts below show temperature and rainfall in the Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The column charts below demonstrate the rainfall and temperature that take place in the Equatorial and Mediterranean climate throughout a year.
Starting with Equatorial climate, the months, January, November, and December in which more than 200 cubic millimeter rainfall takes place that is higher than in other months. Coming to the rest of the months, the rainfall is below 200 cubic millimeters. Turning to the temperature, which starts inclining from January to December, exhibits a minor increase between the April and July that is noticed around 270 degrees Celcius.
Moving further to Mediterranean Climate, the rainfall, which is the highest in the month of January and December, is noticed 150 and 170 cubic millimeters, respectively; in the rest of the months: February and November, it is considered to be below100 cubic millimeters; the temperature, which increases rapidly to over 25 degrees Celcius in the month of August, decreases by 15 degrees Celcius in December.
Overall, the Equatorial climate is higher than in the Mediterranean climate in terms of rainfall and temperature over a period of 12 months.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38418079096 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01752041821 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502824858757 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.805373443 43.030603864 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.833333333 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163776379312 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113279696096 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111549068145 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153355648372 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114763630471 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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