In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about tjis problem?
Currently, the number of people who suffering from starvation increases, although the plethora of measures are used. While this problem is caused by several factors, but possible solutions can be suggested to tackle the issue.
First of all, as the quantity of population is increasing day by day, many countries have a difficulty to give them enough food. Since their financial condition are not wealthy enough, thus, they fail to sustain their people with food. Secondly, many lands have been turned into large cities by devastating agricultural lands. As a result, farmers cannot grow any plants such as wheat and rice. Furthermore, the lack of water to irrigate lands also causes losing lands. Consequently, many people are hungry now.
Even though this is quite serious problem, it can be solved through some measures. Primarily, all nations should unify and they have to fight against this problem together. Governments in the world should pay attention to improve the quality of lands for agriculture instead of increasing cities. Greenhouses should be created to plant vegetables as well as fruits in the winter. Besides that countries have to notice to develop their agricultural industry, namely, they should offer their workers with necessary technologies in agriculture. In this case, we can solve the problem of starvation.
In conclusion, it would be more efficient to think about the core of the issue, because prevention is better than cure
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29184549356 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73629301299 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665236051502 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3391203271 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221710557964 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729176244021 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632632787569 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113384029418 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417666143208 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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