Deforestation is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes and effects of deforestation?
Human activity has destroyed the balance of nature in recent decades. This influence is starting to be more remarkable than ever. One of the most-suffering area is forests. World loses its green space day-by-day. There are some reasons and detrimental effects of the deforestation.
The major reason is wood and paper production. ForestS are precious sources for them and it's possible to get efficient results for manufacturing process. Numerous products are made from wood such as furniture, doors, flooring materials, music instruments and others. Another reason is urbanization. The population increases and every day demand for living place increases as well. If there is new project for building and some green space is obstacle companies destroy these trees. Another reason is forest fires. It can happen by many factors such as global warming, draughts or human factors like arson or accidents.
Forest are lungs of the Earth and people must know that destroying them can bring deadly effects. Deforestation leads to soil erosion and it leads to landslides in its turn. The most terrible effect of deforestation is global warming. Trees give oxygen and destroying them means destroying the balance in the atmosphere. People suffer from the lack of fresh air that is rich of oxygen and it leads to some health problems, especially respiratory problems. As it is mentioned above, deforestation causes global warming and global warming cause forest fires. It all means that deforestation can also speed up itself.
To sum up, forests are priceless treasure and damaging them for getting advantage can cause deadly effects that no one can imagine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34865900383 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95242488986 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5812438498 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.05 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159455845537 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465194617811 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750362720685 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961331546278 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644371865081 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.86 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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