Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time. Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. Do you agree or disagree?
What are the reasons for this?
It has been widely observed by many experts that people have adopted shopping as their pastime activity over many other activities. If asked, I completely agree with this point and this might be because of the effect of urbanization on people from every corner of the world. Here, I would like to discuss some of the possible reasons behind the development of this new habit.
Although wandering in market places could be fun, it has been seen that people’s shopping habits are being profoundly influenced by their favourite and popular celebrities, politicians, or athletes advertising products on social media and television. As compared to the previous century, people are now using more technology and social media to follow recent trends and brands. This has made shopping a great hobby in general because it can be considered a major way to join the bandwagon. (143words)
Urbanization and technology have risen, so people have more free time on hand (available). For instance, the use of electronics has reduced the time of working at home and workplace, both of which have increased the shopping habit of people. Moreover, advertisement strategies have allured people to shop unwanted things. In addition to that, flaunting expensive products has become a status of a certain category of people like youngsters and affluent ones. So, to maintain the status quo among their peers, people often spend time shopping instead of engaging in some leisure activities such as reading, writing, or playing outdoor games.
In conclusion, shopping is an activity which is mushrooming and that might be the side effect of celebrity endorsement which is typical of social media platforms. Nowadays, people tend to spend their time walking in attractive malls and shopping centers to buy trendy goods instead of other useful pursuits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he world. Here, I would like to discuss some of the possible reasons behind the development...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24489795918 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7440443252 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9534822697 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381563143315 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12648724822 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750779258567 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224775180904 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506025102668 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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