Writing task 1 (a letter)
Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say
– Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished.
– Suggest a future use for this building.
– Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.
Dear Sir/Madam,
This letter is written to draw your attention towards the demolition of the Mystic Fall's historic clock Tower.
As the clock tower has been part of the town's legacy for many centuries therefore it would be a great loss to see it being bulldozed and desecrated. It holds immense cultural and social significance to our township. Since it was built by our founding father's, it holds animportant place in our residents heart. Additionally, the tower is a meeting ground for the senior citizens. Every weekend they come together and play chess and other board games. Furthermore, we have petitioned in the court to declare it as a Heritage site .
As the tower has many rooms, it can be used as a community hall for social gatherings, events or even heritage walks. Consequently, it will help in keeping the building working and more people will be aware of the existance of our historical marvel.
I understand the building is quite old and requires fixing, therefore, a carnival can be arranged collect the funds for its repair. Ideally, a heritage walk would be a better idea but due lack of good tour guides we opted for keeping a carnival. Subsequently, there will be a community awareness programme for a month to help spread the word about the demolition of the clock tower.
I would be grateful if you can take sometime to take up our recommendations. Let me know if you wish to discuss it further.
Looking forward to your resonse.
Yours Faithfully
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'towns'' or 'town's'?
Suggestion: towns'; town's
...As the clock tower has been part of the towns legacy for many centuries therefore it ...
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Line 5, column 529, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e court to declare it as a Heritage site . As the tower has many rooms, it can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92125984252 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81341871662 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0628078805 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.125 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194841128581 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554634214859 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477050561642 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955911415135 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589204791137 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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