convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
Over the last few years, there has been a significant increase in the usage of convenience foods among the young generation than the traditional foods. Many people believe that convenient dishes will replace the traditional foods and its preparation style. In my opinion, it is impossible to take away the ancestors food cultures and the preparatory styles by the modern food style.
To commence with, there are mainly two reasons for the English in the usage of convenience foods. One of the major reasons is that most of the people in the present era are busy with their work so they have no enough time to prepare food in their own home. In detail,in these days most of the people living in a nuclear family and all members have their own duties. As a result of this, instead of homely food they prefer fast food, because it is easier and time saving one. To exemplify, nowadays, we can order the prepared food by using our gadgets. Second reason is that the delicious taste of the junk food. The young generation are very fond of the fast food, because of its attracting taste and the cheaper rate. In addition to that we can prepare it by just pouring some water or cooking for 5 minutes. Thus, this can be e prepared by small children also.
However, we cannot neglect the importance of traditional food and its way of preparation. In many occasion, that conducted in our family who use the usual preparatory method and the common dishes. For example, if people conduct a program in their local area they prefer this local food for their party. Moreover, the traditional foods are also the identity of some places. Mainly this is used as a technique to attract touristers. For example, in Kerala there are different varieties of dishes and Thalassery it's a place in Kerala, famous because of the special biryani prepared by them. It is also known as 'Thalassery biryani'.
In conclusion even though the trend of packet foods and tin foods are increasing, because it's easy usage, the traditional food and its way of preparation will not disappear entirely from the society as it has some advantages like tourist attraction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ancestors'' or 'ancestor's'?
Suggestion: ancestors'; ancestor's
...nion, it is impossible to take away the ancestors food cultures and the preparatory style...
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Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...repare food in their own home. In detail,in these days most of the people living in...
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Line 2, column 756, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. In addition to that we can prepare it by just pouring some water or cooking fo...
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Line 2, column 858, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...his can be e prepared by small children also. However, we cannot neglect the import...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occasions'.
Suggestion: many occasions
...nal food and its way of preparation. In many occasion, that conducted in our family who use ...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts way of preparation. In many occasion, that conducted in our family who use the...
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Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...rent varieties of dishes and Thalassery its a place in Kerala, famous because of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55061830972 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516216216216 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3261265378 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372568886035 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114697225234 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866375217659 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249996397117 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670559686718 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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