Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Reading information about the project is significant for many people’s life. Therefore, choosing appropriate way to peruse data is important as well. Personally, I believe that utilizing internet sources in order to be well-informed about research is relatively beneficial. I feel this way for two main reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, information on the virtual servers are frequently changed according to new studies and method, which signifies that individuals are capable of keeping up with data by employing the internet. On the other hand, knowledge on the printed materials can be outdated, thus it will be incomplete and insufficient for recent research. Thereby, individuals can develop the topic more comprehensively by utilizing frequently updated information on the internet. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Two years ago, I was carrying out the class assignment on the topic named “relationship between psychology and study” by reading the handout printed several years ago. I had expended plenty of hours in order to accomplish the presentation until I discuss about the topic at the class. Unfortunately, as soon as I start giving speech, my professor mentioned that some theories mentioned in the book were refuted thanks to contemporary studies. If I had utilized the internet to gain information, I would have prepared and developed my discussion properly and correctly.
Secondly, utilizing advanced technologies such as laptop and cellphone is more comfortable because some books are massive and heavy. People tend to carry their material to many different places so that they will be available to peruse information whenever it is possible when they research about topic. Needless to say, carrying heavy reading material all the time is unpleasant for many individuals. By contrast, people can take advantage on the internet by only using the technology, mobile phone, which they usually bring with them. For instance, last semester, I was attempting to achieve three research on divergent subjects. I was only taking my notebook when I go to various places to study about topics. Therefore, it was comparatively convenient and pleasant for me. If I had read three different books, it would have been arduous to move the three heavy objects all the time.
In summation, I am of the opinion of utilizing internet is advantageous for individuals doing research. This is because data on the internet is constantly renewed, and using books might be uncomfortable to lift.
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Suggestion: to appropriate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38366336634 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09629918931 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55198019802 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8072491391 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8636363636 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133709752203 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369115122004 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417525742278 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957351101542 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639920328294 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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