Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern era, the introduction of a variety of new technologies have changed human's lives. Some people suppose that computers are the most vital innovation of the last centuries. Personally, I totally agree with this view.
It is undeniable that computers are an exceedingly great invention making individual's life more convenient. To begin with, computer plays a role as a means of communication connecting people of all shapes and sizes. Today's people could effortlessly associate with their loved ones throungh using a computer connnecting with the internet. In other words, this invention have erase distances between individuals. Furthermore, there are more options added in the way people entertain. To be specific, humans could enjoy their leisure time at their own home with various kinds of activities on the computer such as listening to music, playing online games or watching films.
Moreover, the computer makes information become more accessible to people. People, with a computer, sitting at home can easily update the latest news on over the world by access to numerous online papers. which leads to more knowledgeable world. The next point is that the emergence of computer created new occupation opputurnities for lots of people in information technology field. Because the development of computer leads to the appearances of many jobs like coders or computer engineer.
In conclusion, as a matter of fact, computer has a dispensable role to play in many extends of our lives. Therefore, it is not overstated to say that computer is the most essential innovation in the last centuries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33725490196 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97945289637 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4920765806 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155860922505 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526185125959 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327646870279 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956341771174 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187315917094 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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