You have long been friend with someone. If they do something that you don’t
like, should you still be friends with him or her
Undoubtedly, when our fellows do something we don’t like, we may be very angry even be outraged initially and tend to break up the friendship. However, the friendship is precious which needs us to cherish. Hence, I could hardly agree more with the statement that if my friends do something I don’t like, I should still be friends with him or her, the reasons of which would be illustrated as follows.
Initially, effective and prompt communication is an integral part to maintain the precious friendship. To state it more clearly, it is common that my friends do something which makes me feel unhappy. If I could communicate instantly and reduce misinterpretation between us, we could continue be fellows. For instance, my roommate took my laptop since his laptop was broken. When I went back to my dorm, I found that my laptop was disappeared. I could not find my computer until my roommate came back. I was outraged at first because he did not tell me and used my personal things. However, he told me that he had send a message to my cellphone and he was hurried to do a presentation. Finally, he apologized to me and I forgave him. Accordingly, only if we communicate instantly and effectively, can we maintain a life-long relationship.
In addition, if we learn to treat things from others’ perspective, we could maintain our friendship with our friends even they do something we not agree with. For example, my co-work, Sandy. She is also my best friend. We work in the same corporation but we are not in the same sector. Once, I applied a certain amount of budget to advertise. Whereas, she disagreed with my application and reduce half of the budget, which made me angry at first. Whereas, from her standpoint, she worked in the cost-control department which aims to control the cost in our firm. It is reasonable that she cut off my application for budget and required me to make a new one. Eventually, we kept our close rapport with each other. Hence, but for the idea of treating things form others’ perspective, we could not have maintained such close rapport with Sandy.
In a nutshell, which I prefer depends on my own experiences, life-style and emotional concerns. To be frank, I prone to choose the idea that if my friends do something I don’t like, I should still be friends with him or her.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: sent
...things. However, he told me that he had send a message to my cellphone and he was hu...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...things. However, he told me that he had send a message to my cellphone and he was hu...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion but we are not in the same sector. Once, I applied a certain amount of budget ...
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...tor. Once, I applied a certain amount of budget to advertise. Whereas, she disagr...
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Suggestion:
... cost in our firm. It is reasonable that she cut off my application for budget an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73827160494 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92958982976 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498765432099 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4586162961 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.76 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227451156668 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669645194714 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117581148476 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205483633495 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123018768191 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.