Some people suggest that it is better for children to be brought up by the whole family including uncle, aunts and grandparents, rather than just the parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.
A segment of society believes that joint family is able to provide the better environment for the growth of the child, when compared to small family. I also believe that people who grow under the guidance of many family members are able to imbibe many useful skills which play significant role in their further development.
To begin with, growing in joint family enable the child to learn patience, sharing and cooperation in much better way. When a child lives in the surrounding where uncle, aunts and cousin are available. They learn to share toys, study together and wait for their turn while playing many games. Apart from this, they are able develop better communication and interpersonal skills which is required in the all stages of life. Along with academic qualification, vital social skills also play a major role to succeed in life. To exemplify, many multinational companies prefer to recruit the employee who have the knowledge of the field and able to communicate well.
Digging deeper, grandparents have huge surplus time, so they are able to devote more time with young ones and they never feels neglected even when both father and mother are working. In addition to this elderly people have more experience of the life, as they have seen different phases, so they are able to guide the child in better way. They also teach moral skill and inculcate spiritual knowledge among juveniles, which turn them into better human being and they grow up into more intellectual and responsible person. This individuals become asset to the family and whole nation.
In conclusion, unequivocally child are brought up in nuclear family these days, but it is irrefutable from the above points that person gets the surrounding and love of the joint family learn many things which is impossible to gain from the parents alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...re intellectual and responsible person. This individuals become asset to the family ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03606557377 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54849234298 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560655737705 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0685920046 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136982024831 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528982819837 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309878604256 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851349954654 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0097413766572 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.