You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Hello! I'm at the pink of my health and hope you're sailing at the same boat. I am inscribing this letter to apprise you with news which has thrilled the entire nation. I wank to inform you about the deadly pandemic Corona Virus-19 which reached in India during the last week and spurting day by day in every nook and corner.
Since Indian is thickly populated country and this disease spreads from person to person, so it has put the whole humanity in dilemma. Even though the supremacy has choose the way of full lock down, it is not so much effective in putting rein on this invasive spreading disease. Lastly, I forgot to mention about the story of one of my best friend who was recently returned from Italy , he was isolated from his family due to the suspicious of COVID-19. Though he was realized later on as his all reports of test was negative. Please keep distance with others and do not come out from home and respect the lock down, otherwise you have to pay heft cost of this.
Take care and stay fine.
With warm Regards,
Navdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Hello! Im at the pink of my health and hope youre...
^^
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...o! Im at the pink of my health and hope youre sailing at the same boat. I am inscribi...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase spreads from person to person, so it has put the whole humanity in dilemma. E...
^^
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
... dilemma. Even though the supremacy has choose the way of full lock down, it is not so...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...end who was recently returned from Italy , he was isolated from his family due to ...
^^
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mily due to the suspicious of COVID-19. Though he was realized later on as his all rep...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... later on as his all reports of test was negative. Please keep distance with othe...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay fine. With warm Regards, Navdeep
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53403141361 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15821166806 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685863874346 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.303975986 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12646197756 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037823047819 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347175567771 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624874888072 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485314065581 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.