Countries should try to produce all the food for the population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people hold a viewpoint that all the food provided for the population should be produced locally. I totally disagree with this statement and my standpoint will be explained in this essay.
There are a number of reasons why countries should not try to produce all the food for the population domestically. First, since people use more chemicals for agriculture, the environment will be effected badly. In fact, the exorbitant use of fertilizers, herbicides, and pesticides onto crops can be released into the atmosphere as harmful air pollutants. Furthermore, heavy rains remove chemicals from the site of food production and transport them to other locations, polluting soils, waterways, and other ecosystems. Second, trying to produce all the food for the population would demand the large share of the population working in agriculture. This means that the governments have to allocate large amounts of labor workforce for many aspects of food production, leading to the lack of investment in other important sectors such as education and medical care.
In addition, if the governments impose a restriction on food import from other countries, local residents will not have a chance to experience the variety of international cuisines. Obviously, due to the different climatic and geographical features, countries cannot grow all sorts of fruits and vegetables throughout the year. In America and Canada, for example, some types of food ingredients simply cannot be produced to provide for the population, so as much as 60% of everything they eat is actually imported from other countries. In a long run, people will not feel the need to know more about international specialties, consequently leading to a lack of mutual understanding of various cultures.
In conclusion, it is not a good idea for countries to limit imported food from the outside and to just produce food domestically as this would take a toll on the locals and the environment.
- Countries should try to produce all the food for the population and import as little food as possible To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Countries should try to produce all the food for the population and import as little food as possible To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Many people hold a viewpoint that all the food provided for the population should be produced locally I totally disagree with this statement and my standpoint will be explained in this essay 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26198083067 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0775414404 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3748706192 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345795086517 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135846787033 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128695323285 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222314935685 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518133949269 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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