You have just received a credit card statement from your bank.
The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to bring your kind attention towards my credit card statement which is depicting about the purchase of costly items during last month. I am one of those loyal clients of your bank who are associated with you since your inception and my credit card number is1122445.
Although I am shopaholic by nature, I did not performed any transaction by using your credit card as I have not activated the pin of this card so far. Moreover, my mobile number and email id are not linked with this card yet. Hence, it is pragmatically impossible to use this card from me end.
Gladly, I have not received any sort of complaint from your institution during my whole tenure, but now it is a matter of grave concern that who has misutilized my credit card without my permission. It would be highly appreciable if you block my credit card so that further misappropriation of funds could be stopped and trace out the accused person who are behind such malpractices.
I am anticipating a prompt response from your side on above cited matter.
Yours sincerely
Navdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
..., dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to bring you...
^
Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted with you since your inception and my credit card number is1122445. Altho...
^^
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'perform'
Suggestion: perform
...gh I am shopaholic by nature, I did not performed any transaction by using your credit ca...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, my mobile number and email id are not linked with this card yet. Hence, it is ...
^^
Line 11, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...practices. I am anticipating a prompt response from your side on above cited m...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80693069307 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70504127676 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5113309543 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225398375631 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883953655915 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522980949531 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122970300082 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570157015144 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.