You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Catherin,
Hello! Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I am feeling anticipated while inscribing this epistle to aprise you regarding confirmation of my addmission at Queen University in your homeland. As you know last year, i have completed my graduation and now further enrolling myself for masters.
Frankly speaking, you are well aware regarding the financial position of my family and they cat not afford to pay for monthly expenses. Therefore, i am quite interested in doing part-time job rather than searching for whole time because in mornings there will be scheduled classes which are unpossible to skip. Seemingly, this way i could earn independently without constituting extra burden on parents.
Since, it has been 2 years that you are residing over there owing to which you surely have some strong contacts and relations with the dwellers who can bestow me with employment opportunities. Moreover, It would be a kind gesture if you could arrange apartment for some time.
I will look forward for prompt and positive response from your side.
Your lovingly,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to pay for monthly expenses. Therefore, i am quite interested in doing part-time ...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...unpossible to skip. Seemingly, this way i could earn independently without consti...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24043715847 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77952526478 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.743169398907 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3028540365 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306749999755 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108665020501 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498133718483 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159439207107 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642137811906 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.