It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Most of the time it comes into the notice that famous celebrities or bureaucrat or any leader live their life only for work without having the theory of “work-life balance”. Work-life should have a great balance with regular life and in my opinion because family and friends are as important as work.
There are different types of people who have different scenarios as per balancing their work life and other parts of life. It never means that people who are day and night into the work is the most famous personality nor does it guarantee an enjoyable life. This might ensure lots of money without any happiness. The job profile like the army is an exception as being an army personnel person is totally devoted to their work and nation in their life work-life balance has no meaning for them. The other example is the freedom fighters like Bhagat Singh and Chander Shekhar Azad had only one dream and they lived for that cause only by making the nation proud of them. We can the most recent example of doctors who are dealing with the pandemic of coronavirus 2019 are working day and night for the sake of humanity and their profession. The work-life balance has lost its meaning somewhere in their life because of stress and responsibilities.
There are some people who have a thought to live their life happily without any kind of stress or problem. They are satisfied with the salaries and amount of work them by them. They feel happy while giving time to their family and friends without disturbing their work life. There is a very small ratio of these types of people because everyone in this mortal world is running after money. Even many big personalities at their death bed regret spending more time with their family.
To conclude, work-life balance is necessary for everyone’s life as it assures you that must not regret later about spending time with family and friend or enjoying life with you near and dear ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
... the time it comes into the notice that famous celebrities or bureaucrat or any leader live their ...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...rts of life. It never means that people who are day and night into the work is the most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78041543027 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36314706912 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510385756677 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9431361091 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454118583555 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174236500735 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989041392382 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304377271073 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688862759715 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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