You have organised to go on a holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday
Explain why you must change your plans
Suggest alternative arrangements
Dear Sam,
It’s been long time since we saw each other and I hope you’re keeping well in this time.
I hope you’ll be very curious about our upcoming trip to Rajasthan and so I’m. As you know, I always have a keen interest in places of historical buildings and this passion forced me to choose this royal city for our holiday. Moreover, it took us a moth time in planning to make it a memorable one. Therefore, I am eagerly looking forward for this holiday.
However, a little alteration needed to be made in the dates of trip because my cousin Lily sister is getting married. Coincidentally, Lily’s wedding and our trip dates falls on the same time. Actually, I need to be there carry out the rituals of a brother. Therefore, I can’t miss the occasion as it is her one of the biggest days.
Is it okay if we postpone our trip by 10 days? Once you confirm me, I’ll postpone all the bookings and reservations.
I’m hoping to meet you soon to recount our old memories
Best wishes,
Vikas
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, incidentally, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53005464481 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.527604474 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677595628415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3442751529 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0833333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117925358162 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414764308528 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375693775221 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674911282192 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447403007141 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, incidentally, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53005464481 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.527604474 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677595628415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3442751529 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0833333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117925358162 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414764308528 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375693775221 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674911282192 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447403007141 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.